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  Dolphins can be really intelligent if taught properly.  You can teach them how to do cool tricks, such as catching a fish mid-air. They can also make clicking sounds. They can make up to 1000 of those sounds in a second. Dolphins can eat bottom-dwelling fish, also shrimp and Squids. These are some things to know about dolphins, and what they are capable of.
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Asian Deadly Tick    4/24/20
 
Asian Deadly Tick    4/24/20
 
Asian longhorned tick looks like any regular tick. but this tick spreads diseases that are very deadly.  
 
Asian longhorned tick looks like any regular tick. but this tick spreads diseases that are very deadly.  
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     Eating late bad for the heart?  
 
     Eating late bad for the heart?  
 
The American Heart association realeased a new scientific statement that seem to suggest eating late in the day is bad for your heart. The website states”allocating more calories earlier in the day might help reduce cardiovascular disease risk”,it read.if someone eats their dinnner at 6pm every night and doesn’t eat again until breakfast they might be feeling clam and fresh right now.eating late can also gain your Weight, But it’s a very small group of people.eating late can affect your body by not realizing it. It happens in our body but we don’t know it. In conclusion eating early is a better way to lose weight.
 
The American Heart association realeased a new scientific statement that seem to suggest eating late in the day is bad for your heart. The website states”allocating more calories earlier in the day might help reduce cardiovascular disease risk”,it read.if someone eats their dinnner at 6pm every night and doesn’t eat again until breakfast they might be feeling clam and fresh right now.eating late can also gain your Weight, But it’s a very small group of people.eating late can affect your body by not realizing it. It happens in our body but we don’t know it. In conclusion eating early is a better way to lose weight.
 
 
 
 
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Dolphins    4/17/20
 
  Dolphins can be really intelligent if taught properly.  You can teach them how to do cool tricks, such as catching a fish mid-air. They can also make clicking sounds. They can make up to 1000 of those sounds in a second. Dolphins can eat bottom-dwelling fish, also shrimp and Squids. These are some things to know about dolphins, and what they are capable of.
 
 
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Dolphins 6/26/20

  Dolphins can be really intelligent if taught properly.  You can teach them how to do cool tricks, such as catching a fish mid-air. They can also make clicking sounds. They can make up to 1000 of those sounds in a second. Dolphins can eat bottom-dwelling fish, also shrimp and Squids. These are some things to know about dolphins, and what they are capable of.

https://www.google.com/amp/s/api.nationalgeographic.com/distribution/public/amp/animals/mammals/c/common-bottlenose-dolphin






Asian Deadly Tick 4/24/20 Asian longhorned tick looks like any regular tick. but this tick spreads diseases that are very deadly. they became an invasive species in the USA and they continue to spread quickly. no one knows how the tick came to the USA and scientists are trying to find out how with no luck. some scientists worry what impact the tick could have on them in the future.

source: https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/2018/12/new-invasive-tick-spreading-through-united-states/






People have been talking about the Death of Geroge Floyd. His name is now very popular. But was his death fated? People protest for his death and the polices that are too brutal. But some say Goerge went to jail for multiple things, like taking drugs or stealing. Some say they even pointed a gun at a woman. But still, no one had died, or no one had to die when the police put there knee on his neck. To be completely honest, I don't like this George Floyd guy because I never heard of him. But seeing the fact that he died because of polices, it still makes me furious.




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COVID-19 is very dangerous, But can we withstand it's power? 6/6/20 Coronavirus is known for a flu, by China, people eat raw bat, and they get it, it is also very contagious, but you can prevent that from happening. You can wash your hands every time you go outside, or touch something from outside. Using hand sanitizer also kills 99% of germs. Another way of preventing coronavirus is by staying home, it will ensure you that you won't get the illness. If you also keep a distance from people, there will be a lower possibility of getting it. Schools have been social distancing which is good because no one has to touch one another. If you cough, cover it because most you can give other people a cold, and if your sick, there will be a higher chance of getting the virus. These are tips to prevent coronavirus, please stay healthy and use these common tips.

https://www.who.int/emergencies/diseases/novel-coronavirus-2019/advice-for-public

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COVID-19 is very dangerous, But can we withstand it's power?

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Coronavirus is known for a flu, by China, people eat raw bat, and they get it, it is also very contagious, but you can prevent that from happening.

      • This sentence doesn't quite make sense. Change it to: "COVID- 19 is a dangerous, highly contagious sickness which originated in China when Chinese citizens ate raw
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Tena, you must write more often if you're going to improve. You should write at least 3 times per week.

Hyena 5/30/20
. The most successful hunter in Africa is not actually the lion, it is the hyena! There are many stories and movies such as "the lion king",of the hyena being evil with its laugh and it has earned a bad reputation. one myth is that hyenas are stupid. but in real life, hyenas help to prevent the spread of diseases by eating dead animals. they also can maintain social bonds and they have to be smart to do that.hyenas also don't laugh. it actually happens when the are upset or distressed. there are many more myths about the hyena and we will have to learn more about them.

https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/2019/06/hyenas-myths-lion-king-africa/






Would a Candidate Curse?

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It is said that people curse, but would a candidate? Well, surveys show that one in every two candidates curse while those who don’t curse are three chances out of two.

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This is evident that candidates don’t curse as much as the average person would.

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In fact, when candidates curse, they are censored.

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There is actually a betting site on this, where people can bet on certain things if a candidate does curse.

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This week’s Democratic debates have been going very well.

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There could be a lot of things that could go wrong in this debate, such as a malfunction during a CNN broadcast.

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Edits: This needs a source, so whoever is reading or editing this can go back to the original source and make sure it goes along the lines of what the article is talking about.






Will A Cadidate say a curse word?

  People say that they curse but when they took surveys. Candidates got 1/2 and the non cursing got 3/2. This is proof that candidates don't curse. When they curse they bleep it out. But other people who got surveyed got 4/2 about getting bleeped. This shows that people curse, even candidates. There is a betting site about this, and this weeks Democratic debates are very good. People can bet on doing lots of stuff if a candidate curse. There can also be a malfunction during the CNN broadcast and people surveyed, yes 6/1 and no 1/12. This can show that candidates curse. 

https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2019/jul/30/will-any-candidate-say-a-curse-word-bookies-take-w/



Pele

Pele was a very good soccer player. He made it in the World Cup when he was just 17 and a half. He said a very popular quote, such as, “When you have the responsibility to carry the name of your country, the World Cup is different." He was born in October 23, 1940. (right now he is 79 years old). What he was famous for is he was the greatest soccer player. He was part of the Brazilian team in the World Cup, and also won three World Cup Championships. One game was a popular match where his team was losing but all of a sudden, he started to catch up and made goals. Then around the end of the game, he made it a tie, he took a single shot and made a goal, and won the match by a measly 4-3. https://www.nytimes.com/2010/06/06/sports/soccer/06vecsey.html

    • Pele was a very good soccer player. He made it in the World Cup when he was just 17 and a half.** **He said a very popular quote, such as, “When you have the responsibility to carry the name of your country, the World Cup is different."** **He was born in October 23, 1940. (right now he is 79 years old).** **What he was famous for is he was the greatest soccer player.** **He was part of the Brazilian team in the World Cup, and also won three World Cup Championships.** **One game was a popular match where his team was losing but all of a sudden, he started to catch up and made goals.** **Then around the end of the game, he made it a tie, he took a single shot and made a goal, and won the match by a measly 4-3.**



Edson Arantes do Nascimento, also known as Pelé, made it to the World Cup when he was just 17 and half years old.

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He is known for saying, "When you have the responsibility to carry the name of your country, the World Cup is different."

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Pelé was born on October 23, 1940, and is currently 79 years old.

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While playing in the World Cup, he was apart of the Brazilian team.

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Throughout his career, he won three World Cup Championships.

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In one match of his career, Pelé helped the team catch up and made goals. Around the end of the match, the score was tied. Pelé took a single shot, helping his team win 4-3.

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EDITED VERSION
Edson Arantes do Nascimento, also known as Pelé, made it to the World Cup when he was just 17 and half years old. He is known for saying, "When you have the responsibility to carry the name of your country, the World Cup is different." Pelé was born on October 23, 1940, and is currently 79 years old. While playing in the World Cup, he was apart of the Brazilian team. Throughout his career, he won three World Cup Championships. In one match of his career, Pelé helped the team catch up and made goals. Around the end of the match, the score was tied. Pelé took a single shot, helping his team win 4-3.


Fortnite Article

Kyle won a fortnite competition and he got $3 million dollars. Teenagers get extra cash usually by mowing lawns but Kyle said no to all other teenagers. He went to a competition and he practiced before the world cup. He won it and now he is rich. He said he played games before the world cup and lasted about 23 minutes in each game. He was competing against 99 other players that are really good. Also practice equals success.

https://www.nytimes.com/2019/07/29/us/fortnite-world-cup-winner-bugha.html



Sharks

  Sharks are very interesting, so these are cool fact about sharks. Did you know that sharks aren't actually, sharks? There actually fishes that weigh 2.5 tons or more! Another cool fact about sharks is that they eat humans, only because they think that they are seals. The main reason why that sharks eat seals, is because sharks favorite meal is seals. The last thing that sharks can do is sharks can actually eat other sharks, and when they mate, they let the babies alone to live by themselves! These are some cool interesting facts about sharks. 

https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/fish/g/great-white-shark/





Ice Cream

   Ice cream is made by milk, flour, and camphor. The Persians made ice cream by putting grape juice and put snow on top. That was in 500 BC. Now the recipe changed over the years. Europeans found out how to make ice cream in the 16th century while US found it in 1744 when  Maryland Governor Thomas Bladen served strawberry ice cream to people. Now there are over 1000 varieties of ice cream flavor. The common flavors are vanilla and chocolate, and adding ingredients such as sprinkles. There also is a thing that if you like a specific type of ice cream. For example, people that like vanilla, they are impulsive risk takers. 

https://www.dogonews.com/2019/7/6/national-ice-cream-month-has-begun




Just 1 Hour of Playing A Game

    Scientists from the University of Electronic Science say that 1 hour of playing games help the brain be active. The scientists got 29 males to play a game called, League Of Legends. Some of the kids have been playing for at least 2 years, the rest of them have been playing fewer than 6 months. The group of 2 years were in the top of the players, this is relevant because this proves that the kids that have more experience are better. And this can help the brain because the brain focuses more. But the people that has less experience only got to the bottom 11%. The reason why they came at the bottom was because they weren't focused. This shows that playing a game in 1 hour can help your attention and help you focus more. 

https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/320943.php




China Not Trustworthy on Trade

  President Trump says that China is untrustworthy in trade. His top negotiators were in Shanghai trying to make a trade deal. This might mean that we won't have rice, since rice comes from China. Also many other foods we eat from China will not be here since China is untrustworthy. China would prefer to deal with a democratic contender, which is Joseph R. Biden and Sen. Elizabeth Warren of Massachusetts. Treasury Secretary Steven Mnuchin and U.S. Trade Representative Robert Lighthizer are in China this week, trying to find out differences about the Asians and find a way trade that doesn't conflict global markets. After the talk in May, they didn't trade but now there going back to where they were before.

https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2019/jul/30/donald-trump-china-not-trustworthy-trade/



Fortnite Article

Kyle won a fortnite competition and he got $3 million dollars. Teenagers get extra cash usually by mowing lawns but Kyle said no to all other teenagers. He went to a competition and he practiced before the world cup. He won it and now he is rich. He said he played games before the world cup and lasted about 23 minutes in each game. He was competing against 99 other players that are really good. Also practice equals success.

https://www.nytimes.com/2019/07/29/us/fortnite-world-cup-winner-bugha.html


Chinese Mothers
  Chinese are superior according to this article. Amy Chua,the article creator, explains why Chinese mothers are superior. Chinese mothers tell there kids to do many math whizzes and music prodigies. Chinese kids are raised so stereotypical and successful because of there mother. Chinese mothers make there kids very smart and they can't attend sleepovers. Also they can't tell there friends to come to there house because of there Chinese parents. This is why Chinese mothers are superior

www.wsg.com

https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2019/jul/30/will-any-candidate-say-a-curse-word-bookies-take-w/


Spiders

  Spiders might seem scary, and at first sight, you may want to kill it, but these are some interesting facts that may not want you to kill these arachnids. There are more than 40000 species of spiders in every continent, besides Antarctica. Also, spiders use there silk to make webs, and capture there prey. And also, spiders aren't even that harmful to human kinds, deadly venom spiders are very rare to find, and they don't bite unless they feel endangered, or unsafe. These are some interesting facts about these cool arachnids, spiders.


Largest Bee There’s a bee named Wallace’s giant bee, a size of a walnut. With a wingspan of the size of our thumbs. It lives in the Indonesian jungle and had been discovered in 1981.

     This bee is like a fictional creation. Being the largest bee and having jaws strong as a stag beetle. It had been placed in the most wanted list in 2015 in the lost species project. “It was more magnificent then I thought, even in death,” said entomologist Eli Wyman.   2/22/20


   Eating late bad for the heart? 

The American Heart association realeased a new scientific statement that seem to suggest eating late in the day is bad for your heart. The website states”allocating more calories earlier in the day might help reduce cardiovascular disease risk”,it read.if someone eats their dinnner at 6pm every night and doesn’t eat again until breakfast they might be feeling clam and fresh right now.eating late can also gain your Weight, But it’s a very small group of people.eating late can affect your body by not realizing it. It happens in our body but we don’t know it. In conclusion eating early is a better way to lose weight.